Originally Posted by
Yoshiyahu
I understand your post...but to me you tend to ramble on with alot unneeded info. Alot of what you say is either useless information or off topic info. An sometimes you just draw out your explanation instead of getting to the point.
A wise saying is to make your words few and brief. No need to have long winded explanation.
So in other words keep your words simple and concise. No need to write a thesis all the time. Just simply make your point. I understand because I too use to have the same problem until I learn how to speak and write in common vernacular so others can understand. Maybe take a college class on speech giving and writing.
Even Barak Obama's speeches are more concise and simple than yours an he is the president of the united states...You might take note of that.